11. 23. 07
I’m heading up a paved mountainside; it’s nearly straight-up and insanely, there is a dotted yellow line painted down the middle. My dashing steed is a white 1994 Dodge Neon. I’m halfway up and the engine is whining; it’s starting to sputter — gasping for relief. That beast of a hill takes over — can’t be sure of the specifics — we aren’t physicists.
And the nose of my poor car is staring at the sun — tipping slowly backward as though resigned to a now grim fate. We’re upside down, this old friend and I — then not: tumbling, free-falling. Metal grinds on searing asphalt and the screeches are deafening. Soon, I think, this must end.
It does, abruptly, and we sit right-side up. A young man is mowing grass in a frenzied state atop a dixie chopper. He is spinning in circles and grass hovers in a hazy wasabi green cloud. Our eyes meet, he nods, and I say, “Thanks for all your hard work.”
While the car is smoking, it seems functional, and I’m headed back up for Round 2.
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November 29th, 2007 at 10:11 am
The imagery of a distracted road crew paving the mountain, flies buzzing about the primordial tar as the dump trucks fall to their demise, keeps popping into my head…
November 29th, 2007 at 11:20 am
sounds like a sequel.